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Note the oneth:

Things move on: yesterday I personally visited several printers around the state while looking for new quotes for Liaden Universe Companion #2 ... yes, the book will mostly likely be over a month late. Forgive me, please. At one good-sized printing plant I happened to be met by the owner who was grabbing a coffee in the front office; his office manager recalled that we'd done other printing at their plant over the years. He looked at a sample of LUC 1, mused that the paper was ... likely "natural" at 50 or 55lbs. And he said, "this is laminated -- you want that, and these blank pages are on purpose, right?" Then he took my info and passed it on to his estimator (who had called for a detail by the time I got home.

At the other plant, it took the front desk person *5* requests and quite a few moments on the intercom to get someone to help me, and that person moved me to the "cold call" office and after a short while began slapping at his chest heroically... trying to shut his cell-phone off but not succeeding. He then excused himself and stepped out of the room and spoke on the phone for some minutes before returning to tell me my page count must be off, and that without a micrometer he couldn't be sure of the weight of the paper. I mentioned I'd several other bids out and gee, could he tell me about "the guy in Farmington" and he complacently said that yeah, they'd bought him. Young sales guy then promised to "feed this into the system" and promised me an answer, probably this week.

Sooooo....
wonder who I'd prefer to deal with?

note the twoth:

in house we have the first round of interview questions from a German magazine, phantastisch! ... and since these are email interviews it could take awhile before it appears. Apparently the rapid appearance of the German editions of Agent and friends is drawing some interest. One informant reports we're getting sandbagging reviews on amazon.de -- but how would I know? Anyone here speak German?

note the threeth:

originally meant to be a travel week ending up at TuckerCon/ARCHON/NASFIC, instead this is a recuperation week of sorts and though I'm keeping busy it certainly is not at the same pace as if I were off to the shadow of the Arch. I have shipped some fliers off to NASFIC ... and am hoping the reach Myles, who took over my room when it became apparent I couldn't go. Friends of Liad -- if you see Myles and haven't seen fliers, ask him: I sent two mixed packages. Meanwhile a repeat request -- if you know you're going to be at a convention, we can ship to you before hand to to your destination, but beware, some places charge absurd amounts for handing over a ream of paper. In any case, with luck, we should have some SRM and Liaden interest flyers. Cross fingers. And BTW, anytime you're at a con and it's closing time, Liaden fans are encouraged to pick up and take with them any Liaden flyers they see that appear destined to be tossed ... you can send them back to us media mail, share them with friends, take them to your next convention/book club meeting/family gathering....
we really prefer them to be used, once printed.

Note the four:

Somewhere around here: ... a blog of note ... especially if you are a writer or interested in writing process ... http://asterling.typepad.com/incipit_vita_nova/ ...
enjoy. If anyone asks, tell 'em Steve sent ya. Meanwhile, if you see a notable blog on a genre-related topic, feel free to let me know....

Note the fivest:

Sharon is apparently not going to Con*Cept in the beautiful city of Montreal this October, while I apparently am. I note Baen authors David Weber and Tanya Huff involved in GoH spots ... it ought to be fun, though I guess I'll have to see how or if my cell service works there...

Note sixish:

I do hope Friends of Lid will be able to put together an FoL breakfast or lunch or party at NASFIC, and if you do I'd love to have some (webbable) photos. I have to tell you that after four or five years of being on the road six to ten weeks for conventions I am going through extreme con withdrawal this year. Attention convention committees: the necessities of Sharon's work schedule these days means we need to plan *far ahead* ... if we win the lottery big-time we may be able to return to a more informal life-style, but the health insurance situation being what it is in Maine, we're expecting I'll be doing more gallivanting than Sharon. If you'd like to see us both, please ask well ahead.

Note the seven:

I have a feeling we're going to hit at least 45 chapters in Fledgling at the current rate, possibly 50. Might be able to get it done, rough, this year. We shall ... see.

Meanwhile, our good (and extremely patient!) buddy Sam Chupp of the Fledgling podcast reports on the order of 150 or 160 subscribers (I guess this is RSS feeds?) to his near weekly reading of Fledgling. Try a listen, do ... and this week, make an effort to tell your friends about Fledgling and the podcast...

Still here? Thanks for reading all this dense stuff! Visit often, tell your friends,
and enjoy!

note the twoth

2007-08-01 15:59 (UTC)
by [identity profile] saruby.livejournal.com
I read German. I will check it out and let you know. I'm afraid my written German is not as good, but "ill work on a good review anyway.

Re: note the twoth

2007-08-01 16:19 (UTC)
by [identity profile] saruby.livejournal.com
So, Conflict of Honors received mixed reviews. This is complicated by the fact that Amazon.de front loaded the more negative reviews and left the two 5-star reviews at the end of the list. Most of the negative comments complained that the story could have taken place on a pirate ship or as a contemporary romance (ie. not strictly SF stuff) and that Pricilla is the protagonist (God forbid women should be protagonists in SF). There is only 1 review so far for Agent of Change. His/her only real criticism is that it didn't enthrall as much as CoH. Naja. I wouldn't worry too much. I read a lot of books that I enjoy and although I occasionally will provide a star rating on Amazon I have never written a review. So the possibility that those who really like the books haven't written reviews cannot be dismissed.

On a final note, I have not read the translated novels. It is always possible that the translation misses something. I would buy them, but at nearly $11 US (based on todays exchange rate) plus overseas shipping.....

2007-08-01 16:04 (UTC)
by [identity profile] magda-vogelsang.livejournal.com
You can always try online translation for the amazon.de reviews. The results are usually amusing, if not always illuminating, and you can usually get the gist, if not all the details. Translating the one review up for "The Agent and the Soldier(female)" (which gives it 3 stars) gave the following:

"An agent, 2. Speaker of the house Korvar, meets complicated Soeldnerin after a notice one into a fight with the "mafia" and helps this for inexplicable reasons. In the following it determines, which is actual for a Terranerin the Soeldnerin holding a Liaden. She is pursued by the gangster organization. Like already in the first novel again a romance develops. The moreover turns out, which the agent foreignsteered by a brain laundry, this mystery separates however in the novel (still?) not up. By members the escape of the planet succeeds to a turtle-well-behaved race, who are friendly with the agent, after some fights. Then still another journey in a spaceship with unusual drive and its unexpected effects follows and show down in the universe. Although the character designs succeeded again completely and the story also tension elements have, this novel for inexplicable reasons bound me however not as much as the first novel of the series, therefore only 3 stars."

I particularly enjoyed "complicated soldier", "agent foreignsteered by a brain laundry" and "turtle-well-behaved race" myself.



2007-08-01 16:23 (UTC)
by [identity profile] saruby.livejournal.com
Most amusing. How interesting that they are unable to translate (female) soldier and (female) Terran in the body of the review.

2007-08-01 19:26 (UTC)
by [identity profile] keristor.livejournal.com
I can understand not translating "Terranerin", I'm not convinced it's a real word (nor is LEO (http://dict.leo.org)). "Soeldnerin" is strictly a female mercenary soldier, ordinary is "soldat" ("soldatin" female soldier) which is rather more specialised.

2007-08-01 23:15 (UTC)
by [identity profile] kinzel.livejournal.com
I wonder if this is the same girl-cootie effect Rolanni is dealing with in her blog...

2007-08-01 16:49 (UTC)
by [identity profile] jennifer-dunne.livejournal.com
Image

Best wishes for a very happy birthday, even if they're a little on the late side. Cats don't make the most reliable delivery persons. :-)

2007-08-01 23:16 (UTC)
by [identity profile] kinzel.livejournal.com
Cats always deliver on time... just ask them!

Thanks!

2007-08-01 17:28 (UTC)
by [identity profile] asterling.livejournal.com
Hi Steve! Hey, I was all set for NASFiC -- but due to recent health problems, I can't go. I hope you have a great experience and you and Sharon connect with many fans and friends.

If you guys get a chance, put a good word in with the Young Adult programming and Beth Bancroft. I was able to help Beth some with planning this. These are the future writers and readers of tomorrow.

2007-08-01 23:17 (UTC)
by [identity profile] kinzel.livejournal.com
I was ready to, but traded my room to a member of the Friends of Liad when we figured out that between some medical things and some cost things it wasn't the best trick to try to pull...

I so hate to miss these things .. it's like missing a family reunion....

flyers for Dragon*Con

2007-08-01 18:13 (UTC)
by (Anonymous)
I will be attending Dragon*Con over Labor Day weekend and could carry flyers over for you. Email me to coordinate kfluhler at aol dot com

Kay

Re: flyers for Dragon*Con

2007-08-03 17:47 (UTC)
by [identity profile] kinzel.livejournal.com
want to drop me an address offlist?

2007-08-01 19:22 (UTC)
by [identity profile] green-knight.livejournal.com
One informant reports we're getting sandbagging reviews on amazon.de -- but how would I know? Anyone here speak German?

I do. Although I sometimes read German texts that make me wonder...

The thing is that the English editions - which Amazon.de also sells, at least some of them - get four and five star reviews throughout.

'Eine Frage der Ehre' had five reviews, three 5*, 1x2*, 2x1*.

It seems as if the readers are dissatisfied with the space-romance aspect of it - the characters aren't complex enough; the SFna; element too weak, ('there are spaceships but it might as well be set on a pirate ship 400 years ago.'

I'd be happy to read a German translation for you to tell you how bad it is; but it's pretty telling that the only bad reviews you get are for the German translation. Translating into German is awkward and I woulnd't want to do it; sentences that sound rich and enticing in English end up feeling overwrought and trite when you translate them, so you're only going to get a little bit of that, but still.

German translations

2007-08-02 01:52 (UTC)
by (Anonymous)
Hi all!

I'm German and a professional (or at least 5 year university trained :) translator. One of the reasons I stopped reading German translations of American/English titles when I still lived in Germany was the truly atrocious quality of said translations. In part, I became a translator because of this (ah, the innocence and drive of youth that think all can be fixed). If my memory serves right, SF was only marginally better than romance in this respect.

The problem is generated by the fact that the publishing houses don't pay chicken shit for translations and consequently will hire anybody 'who speaks English' and therefore has to be a qualified translator and many non-qualified (read Anglisten) folks do this work.

I have absolutely no doubt that some bad reviews can be traced to this issue. Although it does sound like a couple of the reviewers might just have expected something different after reading the back cover summary and hence the disappointment.

If you want a blow by blow, I'd be happy to send you translations.

Sasha

Re: German translations

2007-08-02 06:52 (UTC)
by [identity profile] green-knight.livejournal.com
You're braver than me. I'm bilingual, have never been able to write Fiction in German, but I would not touch translation with a bargepole.

The only translator I've ever read who could make words sing is Annemarie Boell, who translated Susan Coopers 'The Dark is Rising' sequence, so it can be done.

The worst is the... person who translated Judy Tarr's 'Hound and Falcon' trilogy and slapped another ending on it because someone appears to have disliked the original one.

Re: German translations

2007-08-02 16:53 (UTC)
by [identity profile] od-mind.livejournal.com
The Patron Saint of Translators, as best I can tell, is William Weaver, who translates the original Italian of Umberto Eco and Italo Calvino into English. Translating (as you note) requires a particular genius that seems to be pretty rare.

(One of the things I like about Val Con is that he approaches the task of translating among languages he's fluent in with fear and trembling.)

Incidentally, Ich habe kein Deutsch, but I'm pretty good in French. Are there French editions of any Liaden Universe(tm) works?

Re: German translations

2007-08-02 19:52 (UTC)
by [identity profile] keristor.livejournal.com
Have you read Umberto Eco's "Rat and Mouse"? He looks at translation as negotiation -- it is impossible to produce a perfect translation, you have to negotiate what you are willing to lose for the effect you want.

Re: German translations

2007-08-02 20:31 (UTC)
by [identity profile] od-mind.livejournal.com
He looks at translation as negotiation -- it is impossible to produce a perfect translation, you have to negotiate what you are willing to lose for the effect you want.

Exactly.

The best French class I ever took was a daunting thing called "Advanced Grammar Through Translation". One of the things we studied was the classic translation of Alice's Adventures in Wonderland into French, wherein the translator was faced with the question of how to handle a thousand puns in English. It was fascinating to be able to see that negotiation in action, where meanings were bent slightly in order to facilitate an 'equivalent' pun in French...

Re: German translations

2007-08-03 08:42 (UTC)
by [identity profile] keristor.livejournal.com
Ouch, I'd hate to have to translate 'Alice'. That has to be one of the more extreme examples, with not only wordplay but also deliberate poetic amphigory (is it even possible to translate Jabberwocky?). It can be seen with the Bible and poetry, some versions keeping the poetic forms intact but losing meaning, some using a different poetic form from the destination language and others going for the meaning and losing the poetry.

My preference with a language that I only partially understand is a combined translation, with both a "readable in English" form and an 'interlinear' form (with the original interspersed with a literal translation). That way I can real it for comprehension but can also refer to the original for the literal meanings, poetry and wordplay. I have a volume of the Norse "Poetic Edda" done like that, it really needs the original for the poetic aspect but my Norse isn't good enough to to understand it just from the original. One of my versions of the Bible is like that as well (Greek interlinear).

Re: German translations

2007-08-02 22:16 (UTC)
by [identity profile] kinzel.livejournal.com
No, there are not ... we've apparently not had enough French readers to demand a French publisher take on the Liadens....

I, alas, was once a traveling poet and a very mediocre student of Spanish. Despite this, I found Pablo Neruda readable and read him in original when I could and English when I couldn't. Imagine me, young gung-ho "going to be a writer one day yes I am" university student coming face-to-face with someone who had mistranslated one of his more powerful images!

Not a pretty sight. Since this person's appearance was funded as part of "interdisciplinary studies" and the English faculty knew me for one who was willing to back up my disagreements with "authority" they let me stay at the reception even after the question-and-answer session got warm. I gathered later we were all to have bowed in awe in being able to rub shoulders with ... sigh.

But yes, translation is uncertain, and someone is always more right than the translator.

Re: German translations

2007-08-02 18:58 (UTC)
by [identity profile] alfreda89.livejournal.com
The worst is the... person who translated Judy Tarr's 'Hound and Falcon' trilogy and slapped another ending on it because someone appears to have disliked the original one.

ARGGHH!

Did you ever tell Judith Tarr? She would probably like to know...despite the massive annoyance and irritation it will cause.

Re: German translations

2007-08-02 20:16 (UTC)
by [identity profile] green-knight.livejournal.com
She knows and was rather apalled at the thought. I hadn't realised for a long time - I'd read the German translation, then couldn't get my hands on the English ones, and by the time I got to read them, I no longer had the translation at hand.

And for all that, on close examination, the translation is *dreadful* the story stuck in my mind as one of the most beautiful stories I'd ever read, and was one of the reasons I became a reader of fantasy - I wanted more books like that. Finding the books much more beautiful in the original was the icing on the cake.

Re: German translations

2007-08-02 20:47 (UTC)
by [identity profile] alfreda89.livejournal.com
I agree, she writes beautifully, and it was an awesome series.

Re: German translations

2007-08-02 20:43 (UTC)
by [identity profile] od-mind.livejournal.com
My favorite Bad Translation moment (though not in the same league as the Judy Tarr example you cite) is from the F. Ledoux translation of The Lord of the Rings. Toward the end of the book, Eomer refers to Merry as "Holdwine of the Mark". Holdwine = Anglo-saxon holt 'woods' + wine 'friend' = "friend of the forest", "Ent-friend".

The translator, of course, didn't notice that the name was Rohirric and not Westron, and rendered it with an old French word for "cup-bearer". Hold+wine, get it?

2007-08-01 19:34 (UTC)
by [identity profile] keristor.livejournal.com
The next convention to which I am going will be in Germany, end of September. Since postage over to Europe is rather a lot, do you have the flyers as PDF that I could get printed out here? Or perhaps someone could scan one and send it? Either English or German flyer would be fine, most of them read English as well as speak it (and I have heard from many of my German friends that they would rather pay high prices for the originals of most books than the cheaper translated ones).

(Email is chris AT {my_LJ_name} DOT net)

If I haven't mentioned it...

2007-08-01 19:38 (UTC)
by [identity profile] alfreda89.livejournal.com
I would be happy to put out materials at ArmadilloCon for you guys. I may be pushing the envelope on it this year (we're talking next weekend) but I live in Austin, and go every year, so if there's no time this year, then another year.

Might still do WFC. It depends (partly) on whether I have a sale by then. If I do, I hope I can talk you guys into coming down for a meal -- my treat!

I also regularly do ConDfW, AggieCon, Soonercon...and ApolloCon looks like it may be a regular for me, too.

So let me know...

Re: If I haven't mentioned it...

2007-08-01 23:19 (UTC)
by [identity profile] kinzel.livejournal.com
Right -- we're going to convert most of them into PDFs and have them downloadable anyhow ... good plan.

Re: If I haven't mentioned it...

2007-08-01 23:22 (UTC)
by [identity profile] kinzel.livejournal.com
Next week is probably OK ... I wonder fi you have a feel for attendance numbers so I know how many I ought to send? No, I do not send enough for every member of the con ...

Re: If I haven't mentioned it...

2007-08-02 18:45 (UTC)
by [identity profile] alfreda89.livejournal.com
I've never actually asked them, but I'd guess several hundred. Big names on the GoH can draw more, unknowns don't bring in extra. This con doesn't do masquerades, never had gaming until recently, and now gaming's hidden off to the side -- they are about books, with a nod to TV/movies in the genre.

Re: If I haven't mentioned it...

2007-08-02 18:55 (UTC)
by [identity profile] alfreda89.livejournal.com
I've popped the committee a question on numbers -- if they get back to me today I'll let you know.

Re: If I haven't mentioned it...

2007-08-03 15:01 (UTC)
by [identity profile] alfreda89.livejournal.com
This year's ArmadilloCon will have between 400 and 450 people, counting everyone con-related on-site.

Re: If I haven't mentioned it...

2007-08-03 17:45 (UTC)
by [identity profile] kinzel.livejournal.com
Want to drop me a good address and I'll pop a few i nthe mail?

Thanks!

Re: If I haven't mentioned it...

2007-08-04 06:16 (UTC)
by [identity profile] alfreda89.livejournal.com
Just dropped!

And now, Zzzzz

Flyers

2007-08-02 15:33 (UTC)
by [identity profile] missingvolume.livejournal.com
Just slip some in my next order since you seem to have Dragoncon covered. I'll be at Necronomicon and WFC in the next few months.

Fledgling chapters

2007-08-02 15:47 (UTC)
by (Anonymous)
If Fledgling is going to be 45-50 chapters and our donations only covered 30-some, why not revert to the original rules and ask for donations again when you get to that point? It made sense to close the kitty when you weren't sure of the number of chapters - it might allow you to both slow down the process a little and be paid for your work.

I suggest this as a regular Fledgling reader who misses my fix but wants our authors to be happy, well paid, etc.

And who is Myles? I'm going to NASFIC (last minute decision) and would certainly go to a Friends of Liad event. I assume there will be bulletin boards or other processes to notify people.

B. O'Brien

Re: Fledgling chapters

2007-08-02 22:18 (UTC)
by [identity profile] kinzel.livejournal.com
We are very much in the midst of some other stuff right now. Come chapter 30 we'll have a better idea of timing, and necessity.

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