While it is just about *guaranteed* that any comment about typos will both have some itself, and miss mentioning something critical...
"Ghost Ship published in hardcover with an August of 2011" either "a release date of August 2011", or "an August 2011 release date"
"several more due" becomes "several more due"
There are other parts I would restructure, but it feels weird beyond measure to suggest style changes to a multiply-published professional author when my own (thin) credentials are all in blurb writing and copy editing.
In more useful news, I just finished reading Ghost Ship, and was completely delighted. In fact, I think it's time to find a cozy chair and read it again.
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2011-07-18 00:58 (UTC)"Ghost Ship published in hardcover with an August of 2011" either "a release date of August 2011", or "an August 2011 release date"
"several more due" becomes "several more due"
There are other parts I would restructure, but it feels weird beyond measure to suggest style changes to a multiply-published professional author when my own (thin) credentials are all in blurb writing and copy editing.
In more useful news, I just finished reading Ghost Ship, and was completely delighted. In fact, I think it's time to find a cozy chair and read it again.