About those sentences from works in progress

[kinzel]

I've been meaning to put something up...
and figured one sentence wasn't quite enough context from a rough draft...
so here's two sentences.

About then the rear door of the hauler opened up, and the two men
stood there, each with a stunner in hand.
"Well there, that's not so much fun, is it?"

Comments

[ixixlix.livejournal.com]

Loses something out of context. But the mental picture is surprisingly dynamic.

Lauren in Los Angeles